Bite My Lip
A poem by Dallas
Biting my lip when I see you stare,
But knowing you don't care,
All of it just so unfair.
Butterflies flutter when I see you in the hall,
Bite my lip to silence my call,
How can you make me feel so small?
Bite back my tears when my changes, whatever the size,
Won't turn your eyes,
And it hurts to realize.
So what do I do?
Biting my lip around you,
Because I know my dreams are too good to be true.
My lip is getting sore,
I don't think I can do this anymore,
I'll stop, when you stop biting yours.
I thought this was really cute. It is definatly something everyone can relate to. Great job.
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I think it was a little more deep than most poems that I read that are by teenagers, yet still it can relate to so many. You did a great job.
ReplyDeleteI really had a connection with your poem. There has been a couple times in my life that can be completely described by it.
ReplyDeletei feel you girl to be honest this make me tear a little... :/ i feel like you know whats in my head sometimes.
ReplyDeletebecca this is beautiful in the simplest way and i love how you think about things in life. you have a way with your words :)
ReplyDeleteYes love the rhyming!! This is a very good poem I really liked it. Just like everyone else I can relate to it. I this this would make an awesome song, just something to think about.
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